You need to make it look more like grapes, so far it is too sketchy, you should define the flame pillar more precisely, try this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GE1DeGHqXME
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You need to make it look more like grapes, so far it is too sketchy, you should define the flame pillar more precisely, try this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GE1DeGHqXME
I don't really like the outcome of this tutorial, ugh
мыло же
I think it pretty good, but some line (i think) should be Blur a bit cause they are too straigt:)
P3M
Oh that look "hot"!
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StarksNotDead
Soo it's okay and it looks like an explosion? x)